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doesn't subordinate one clause the the other and that gives us a sense of fullness. We don't say we stopped at an inn. We ate eggs, bacon, pickle bonnets, cheese, beer, which would just be a list, an itinerary. And it would be accurate and it would fit for some paragraphs, but not when
BEAUTIFUL WRITING EXPLAINED - EVELYN WAUGH'S 2 SENTENCE MASTERCLASS
doesn't subordinate one clause the the other and that gives us a sense of fullness. We don't say we stopped at an inn. We ate eggs, bacon, pickle bonnets, cheese, beer, which would just be a list, an itinerary. And it would be accurate and it would fit for some paragraphs, but not when
BEAUTIFUL WRITING EXPLAINED - EVELYN WAUGH'S 2 SENTENCE MASTERCLASS